i'm backi will have lots more poetry to share really soon if anyone gives a fuck
well, i'll try to sign in more often and maybe get a pic or 2 of me up here
ttyl,
DaN
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The story of my lifeA lost pathetic soul does weepThe story of my life
Believes to be in the right direction
Proved ever wrong by the vain
For they don’t take the time
To look into his eyes
A conversation never arose
An interest never shown
Not a hope in this world
This vanishing existence
by ~inflames05
Flirtation and AbandonmentFrom where he can see She sits and touches her hairFlirtation and Abandonment
An obvious act of seduction
And while he mopes around unknowingly
She hopes he will rise and participate
A wink is exchanged as She strokes Her arm
And takes one step closer
Innocently peering up from the ground
His infinitesimal gaze rocks Her foundation
Mysteriously though She turns her head
Beginning to re-enter Her fortress
He does not believe such anticipation
by ~inflames05
Suffocation Through GuiltDoes the prayer get through? Do the worthless mind That we've left them all one step behind?Suffocation Through Guilt
Do they feel pain? Does it register That the world is hiding the answer?
One motive... so blinding The West feeding on the East Such force... such power Like vultures harvesting a feast
Does the story change? Do the tables turn? Do the greedy pay for a lesson learned?
Do they weep In their graves? Does the karma overtake their space?
One day... one day Suffocation through guilt Some say that some way This
by ~inflames05
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ignorancethe shadowy corners of my soul ache for the creature wandering through my mindignorance
he walks in your shoes his shadow takes your shape his laugh is your echo but it's not you...is it? can it possibly be?
can you possibly live up to the golden image with his adorably unsteady gait that fills the absences, soothes the pain and makes me feel real?
though the only reality I've ever known exists only behind the dark of my eyelids, in the resounding silence of my hollow mind and in the seduction, the perversion of my slowly greying heart.
by ~jessfiness
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- Current Residence: North Bay, ON
- Interests: Listening to music, writing lyrics & singing, writing poetry
- Favourite movie: American History X, In Dreams, The Score, Dragonfly, Identity, Memento, 28 Days Later, Green Mile
- Favourite band or musician: In Flames (old), Chimaira (new), Arch Enemy (new), Trivium, Lamb of God
- Favourite genre of music: Metal
- Favourite poet or writer: me
- Operating System: Windows XP
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- Website: http://www.myspace.com/inflames05
- Email: philly_spitfire2k2@hotmail.com
- AIM: dansarlo
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i think our poetry is very similar which is really cool
i enjoyed the one you just wrote called "ignorance"
i think i found your poem by randomly looking through some poems on browse and i enjoyed it a lot
i was actually at school when i found your poem
anyway, keep up the good poetry writing!
ttyl,
dan
i just did it because it seems that our poems are somewhat similar in nature...
-dan-
and hi, welcome to the party
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